Thursday, 26 November 2020

What i felt in my creative story.

What i felt: i felt water driping all around/over me and the sun burning my whole body. What i saw:i saw a scary dark trees and dark/gloomy clouds and weird stuff droping on the ground. What i thought: i thought the clouds were going to make everything Go Bad if it went stormy And also thought that everything was so spooky and scary around the woods or wherever i went to. My caption, i hope you enjoy what i felt saw and thought in my creative story and what i thought to type

Sunday, 22 November 2020

Letter to the Hiwire people

Thank you for all of the Lunches that you have given us and provided as well It was really helpful and nice of you to share what you have made for us, But Not only that you have also helped the kids in Edmund hillary by bringing everybody Lunch even for those who had No lunch and water in their bags for the zoo trip Last wednesday We are really grateful for all the help you have done and suppor as well.

A possible Writing Frame...

The writer is using a computer to compare his things & others. The author makes this comparison to make the reader think he is similar to to the story he makes I think the author did this because He thought it would have been nice to do one.

what i felt,saw,and thought was going to happen in the story i typed and made up

What i felt,saw,thought. What i felt: i felt water driping all around/over me and the sun burning my whole body. What i saw:i saw a scary dark trees and dark/gloomy clouds and weird stuff droping on the ground. What i thought: i thought the clouds were going to make everything Go Bad if it went stormy And also thought that everything was so spooky and scary around the woods or wherever i went to.

My story of the week

In the afternoon there was someone walking into the woods and it seemed to be a 34 year old man,it was really dark on the other side by the woods, the clouds looked really gloomy and looked liked it was going to be super thundery,everything in there was really spooky and the man was so scared , the grass was just calming down from the heavy rain but so was the clouds,they started going away as soon as the grass started to stop blowing.

Tuesday, 10 November 2020

the differences between T and edmund hillary

T is not really known he is always different everyday he also likes working alone on things and he is usually not planned on others as well,he even likes to stop things by tackling people on the ground. What's similar about t and edmund hillary. is that they both like working in teams . And like stoppings as well. What made edmund hillary a famous person to the people and New zealand? He climbed the highest snow mountain all on his own and people started knowing him alot. He's not just a New zealand hero he is also known as a community Hero he planned a lot and he works in a team. T and sir edmund hillary are Not the same, T just tries to tackle everyone from those who are trying to steal and edmund hillary is a hero because he went right up to the top of the snow mountain.

Thursday, 29 October 2020

a poem we had to do

Friday 30th October 2020 Colour : is going to be yellow The colour yellow is a colour that shows when you are happy or not, Things that are that colour: Banana Ice cream And the sun The colour yellow feels like a whole bunch of flowers. The colour looks like the colour between orange and green The colour feels like a big ball of sun is going to roll all over the ground.