story of the week

It was afternoon when I walked happily past these long and tall trees they were dark brown,It was half sunny and half shadowy, Ones I started to look at them they started to make me feel a bit creeped and scared, Ones It started getting a bit sunny the sun started crawling past the long ground slowly, The mountain at the back started shining and showing up clearing with brightness sun sprinkling up on top of the mountain as the mountain had a whole bunch of snow slipping off quietly. As the shadow started to disappear the sun started to take right over. When the snow was dropping off they were dropifull “ this was so good. I liked the adjectives you used. Keep up the good work. Next time maybe focus on the setting a bit more. :) Jamie . Mara-Lee thank you